•Student writing samples before and after revision
•Peer conference recording sheets
•Looked for revising trends that emerged across student work samples
•Went through each sample and recorded which revisions students made
•Listened to and analyzed video data for the types of supports students were giving each other to make revisions
•Looked for correlations between the structure of the protocol and the types of revisions students were making.
Student Work Sample
The following images show one students draft, revision choices, and final essay. Click each image to view it.